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I still feel like a 13 year old…

November 12, 2007

…and apparently I still write like one too.

cash advance

The best part is that as soon as I saw this I immediately tried to think of ways to frame this in a positive light. I won’t, apparently I just need to improve.

I hope the title of this post made my Dad think he forgot my birthday, at least for a few seconds.

Update: As usual I forgot the HT: Nakedpastor

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7 comments

  1. Don’t worry, so does mine. I wonder how much jargon I need to incorporate to up the reading level?


  2. Li, Read the comments @ Naked Pastor – especially those of your dear old Dad. It’s a scam. If you really want to see how you write, go here. Right now your advertising for some kind of cashadvance site.


  3. Took out the advertising part. Clearly there is some algorithm in place as they are different.


  4. That is to say I took out the advertising part before I put the post up. I noticed it in the code and removed it.


  5. Well I enjoy it. Does that put me on a par with an American Junior highschooler?


  6. Hey Andy,
    Probably not, apparently Newspapers aim at a grade 5 level reading comprehension. I guess the goal is to be understood, not to sound intelligent and be confusing.
    Thanks for the kind words. I’m glad you enjoy it, I enjoy writing it.


  7. That’s okay. Evidently I write on an elementary school level. 🙂



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